Monday, July 13, 2009

Seven ate 9....

as we climbed to new heights
i marvelled at the thought of defying gravity
for once we were loving to full capacity
until suddenly the rain begin to pour
drifting back down
four letter words sent us catapulting through a darkened sky
and for the first time i watched the moon cry
as we snatched thunder and lighting apart


withlove__starz said...
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withlove__starz said...

those last two lines are the BOMB!!!!
a.. the moon being so beautiful.. a satellite.. the biggest light of the night... & in your poem.. i see it as love.

and it cried..

and thunder and lightening go s well together.. lightening isn't so scary with out thunder..

just a few thoughts... i could go on..
but nice.

it'sok2bu*nique* said...

love it!!

Shandra E...*the misses said...

thanks guys....i wanted to explain the Thunder & lightning, but i erased it because it took away from the "silent yet violent ending"...

on that comes another blog (sequel)!! lol...

Shandra E...*the misses said...

btw...WHY WAS 6 SO AFRAID OF SEVEN??? ...because Seven 8ight 9...and Cloud 9 was never reached... ;)

just thought i'd solve my own riddle?! lol