Monday, July 13, 2009

Seven ate 9....

as we climbed to new heights
i marvelled at the thought of defying gravity
for once we were loving to full capacity
until suddenly the rain begin to pour
drifting back down
falling
6
5
four letter words sent us catapulting through a darkened sky
and for the first time i watched the moon cry
as we snatched thunder and lighting apart




5 comments:

withlove__starz said...
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withlove__starz said...

those last two lines are the BOMB!!!!
a.. the moon being so beautiful.. a satellite.. the biggest light of the night... & in your poem.. i see it as love.

and it cried..

and thunder and lightening go s well together.. lightening isn't so scary with out thunder..

just a few thoughts... i could go on..
but nice.

it'sok2bu*nique* said...

love it!!

Shandra E...*the misses said...

thanks guys....i wanted to explain the Thunder & lightning, but i erased it because it took away from the "silent yet violent ending"...

on that note...here comes another blog (sequel)!! lol...

Shandra E...*the misses said...

btw...WHY WAS 6 SO AFRAID OF SEVEN??? ...because Seven 8ight 9...and Cloud 9 was never reached... ;)


just thought i'd solve my own riddle?! lol